Luv it, I agree with lorien1976 with her comment on the eyes. I'd fill them in either black and get a small highlight. Try it out and see if you like it more. You can try different colors such as dark red and blue.
definatly! I'm glad you listened, no prob. I really like your work and I'm acctually creating a tattoo design for someone's shoulder blade. I'm thinking about doing a bat wing that spreads across that part of the person's body. Do you think you can help me out?